I did read it. Starting with the title: "How to actually be more attractive: manly male edition". That sounds like general advice suited for the whole male population. At least it's misleading.

IMHO, a more apt title for a piece based on your own personal opinion and experience would be kind of "How to be more attractive for women like me", or something like that.

Lastly, I didn't mean to be offensive; I'm sorry if it felt that way. I just pointed out my... opinion. ;-)